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Dear Casey,
It’s such an honor to write this letter to you. I’ve been your biggest fan ever since I went to your first baseball game! I’ve watched you play for as long as I can remember and I’ve always thought you were the best baseball player out there, but I want to tell you what I thought about your last game. You were my hero, but now I think I have to find a new one. What happened Casey?
The conflict was obviously you thought you were too good. I’ve never seen you act like that, especially when you only had one inning left and you were down four, two. Did you really think you could hit any ball you wanted? Well, you didn’t. Everyone was counting on you Casey, especially since you were known for hitting homeruns and winning games for the team.
You’re conflict resulted in you not hitting any of the balls. You lost the game for everyone , and they were all counting on you. How do you feel now? Because you thought you were too good and started being arrogant, you let down all your fans, especially me. That day, you lost a lot of your fans. You striking out and being too arrogant could get you sat for a game or worse, getting kicked of the team. Is this the real you Casey? I am very disappointed and so are a handful of fans.
I am sorry for being so rude or harsh, but this is how I feel and I bet a lot of other people do too. If you do something selfish or arrogant, there will always be consequences. I would think getting kicked off the team would crush you, but maybe that’s what you need. Maybe it will help you solve your arrogance issues. I hope I see you next year being the best baseball player I know and love.
Your former #1 fan,
Kennedi Bates
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