Authors Note: This is a writing piece about if I am proud of my country. I explain my reasoning and conclude my idea.
Am I proud of my country? That's like asking a mother if she loves her child! Who wouldn't be proud of a country you love? Many countries do not have freedom of speech or any freedom at all! We can say whatever we want and fight against for what we believe in. In my country no one says who we have to vote for or who we have to like. We make our own choices and our own decisions. Freedom is everything.
We also have a democracy that allows us many choices and a voice in policies and actions. It gives us, the people to vote for and elect who we want to rule the country. And after four years we do it all over again. There isn't such thing as a king or dictator in my country, which makes it the best country in the world.
Lastly, citizens of our country fight for their lives to protect us! They volunteer to do that! In other countries you are forced to fight for your country but not in my country. We get a choice and many people take the choice to fight for us and not just be lazy or stay in bed all day. How could you not be proud of this country and its people?
That is really good i like how you have organization. If this is an essay make sure you have at least 3-4 paragraphs. I also like how you have an authors note in the beginning. Overall it is very good.
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